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#1
11-24-2008, 08:31 PM (This post was last modified: 11-24-2008, 08:33 PM by stephensweann.)
This is art for the characters that me and a friend are working on. So far there are earth, wind, and water, and we are currently working on fire.
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The boys are nathan and aaron stokes, they are brothers, not by blood, they are step brothers and the girl is Tara Bridgeway and she is 16 years old and so is nathan and aaron, aaron is dating Tara.
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11-24-2008, 08:38 PM
My guess is you like Naruto. Very much.

Umm, in fairness, it's not bad.
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11-24-2008, 08:38 PM
Pretty standard boring poses. You look to be making a ninja manga of some sort, so do you have a bit more of an interesting pose for us to see? Something a bit more... I dunno, fun to look at? I mean, they're all sorta mechanically right, but they're also really, really bland.

That and Tara has a man-chin.


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#4
11-24-2008, 08:42 PM
Also, a tip.

You shouldn't aspire for the quality you see in manga. Because chances are, the mangaka can draw tons better than what you see on the page.

Take the best sketch you can do, cut the quality in half, and that's most probably what people will see.

Yeah, take it from someone who's tried making an indie.
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11-24-2008, 08:48 PM (This post was last modified: 11-24-2008, 08:48 PM by stephensweann.)
well, me and my friend are working on different poses. just because I only have those pics right now doesn't mean I won't have more in the future.
and we are working very hard on the drawings.
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#6
11-24-2008, 11:25 PM
the point was that you have to draw en masse to make a manga.
Your best work won't be on every page, it will be more like, 1/2 of your best work.
Unless you want to take a month per chapter.

They aren't bad, somewhat meh.
The element theme is over done and somewhat bland, but oh well.
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11-25-2008, 02:37 AM
Seems like another result of the media sensation that is narvatar.
They're not bad, but they're not really spectacular either. The only one with any 'real' issues is the girl, whose neck is too thick, pinky finger too short, and awkward almost cross-eyed eyes.
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#8
11-25-2008, 03:51 PM
i thought the girl was a boy

starndard boring genereic anime teen fad drawings, sorry
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11-25-2008, 07:43 PM
I have to agree with everyone, but I think that you can do a lot better (by better I mean not narutard-ish) with those skills.
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