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#16
11-19-2008, 06:27 AM
the first stanza is the only good part of the poem, the second makes it fall apart.
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#17
11-19-2008, 10:31 AM
Uhhhmmm

Well, the first stanza isn't bad, but I wouldn't say it's good either.
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