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#31
06-30-2010, 01:05 AM
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#32
06-30-2010, 03:51 PM
Looking good so far, I kinda of don't like the nose, I guess it's the colors.
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06-30-2010, 09:42 PM
its me or that highlight on the nose is just too distracting?
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#34
06-30-2010, 09:46 PM
I believe thats actually a nose piercing chaps.
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06-30-2010, 09:51 PM (This post was last modified: 06-30-2010, 10:09 PM by triptych.)
yeah its a nose piercing
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5 attempts and everything looks like shit
fuck you, "the rest of the hair"
you are literally being the hat from that last portrait i did
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#36
06-30-2010, 10:51 PM
the hair is fine, what bugs me is where are the ears actually place in her head.

unless you're planning to draw over the hair later and connect them to the head, they're just poping out from nowhere.
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06-30-2010, 11:05 PM (This post was last modified: 06-30-2010, 11:07 PM by triptych.)
no way to say this without sounding like backpedalling but im gonna say it anyways!!!!!!!!!!!!


i dont even care its not my design
just say theyre coming from the exact back of the head or something
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06-30-2010, 11:11 PM
OH OKAY *WINK*
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#39
07-01-2010, 12:59 AM
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gonna clean up the hair and i should be done with that
ended up pissing me off less than i thought it would
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#40
07-01-2010, 07:20 AM
How do I put this

The 'top' of the hair, and the curved bands of shading where is connects to the part of the hair in shadow? I think it should extend a bit further, and be less regular.
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#41
07-01-2010, 01:33 PM
maybe something like this?
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left the old version on the right for comparison
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#42
07-01-2010, 02:24 PM
Actually I meant this:

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But my irrational fear of drawing on your work meantn that I ended up being confusing. it's because my parents died by drawing on someone elses work when i was a small child.
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07-01-2010, 11:08 PM (This post was last modified: 07-01-2010, 11:08 PM by triptych.)
takes a big steaming poop on thraed
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ears are rough shading and not cleaned up in case you're stupid
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#44
07-02-2010, 07:04 AM (This post was last modified: 07-02-2010, 07:07 AM by Gors.)
it still looks sexy as hell

I don't exactly understand the hair though... that place Grooveman pointed out is filled of random blobs, making it look like she has a hole in that part of the hair.

I can't explain it well so I did a quick edit to show what I mean (small square is original)

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#45
07-02-2010, 09:02 AM
i'd go ahead and repeat the exact same thing i said on that one hat-nightmare thread thing.

simplify the hair, you're getting frustrated because you just want it to look even more complicated than it should. as gorsal mentioned, you don't even need so many random blobs of hair. mean, look at how rokkan shades hair on his furries.
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