07-27-2009, 12:53 AM
@omegakyogre, you will definitely need to work more on the wings. Try to make sure that the wing in the back is actually different, not just shifting the same image. Also, it's kinda hard to see all of the body parts; the arms and legs blend in together too much. It could be the posture, but I think it might be a good idea to darken the leg in the back (his left leg) to make it stand apart from the arm in front of it.
Actually, it might be a good idea to also move that leg a bit. It looks kinda awkward in that position.
@gorsal, sorry for the fact I haven't done anything last week. I was distracted with school stuff, reading Full Metal Panic, and playing TF2...
I'll try to get running and jumping done this week.
Actually, it might be a good idea to also move that leg a bit. It looks kinda awkward in that position.
@gorsal, sorry for the fact I haven't done anything last week. I was distracted with school stuff, reading Full Metal Panic, and playing TF2...
I'll try to get running and jumping done this week.