05-04-2014, 12:48 PM
for the running animation:
since the head isn't changing, it looks totally off (like it's just a sticker that's just pasted on as an afterthought, which, y'know, it literally is); I'd suggest having the head move at least a little, maybe a tiny bit of side to side (but not too much, since that could clash with the aesthetic)
the legs also look like some frames might be out of order or there's too large a gap between some frames (which can be fixed by adding more frames or by editing the offending frames to have less gap). another thing is that the 3/4 view of the upper body is somewhat clashing with the profile view on the legs
actually, looking at it more, it also looks like his butt juts out when his left leg (closer to us) moves forward, which is awkward
since the head isn't changing, it looks totally off (like it's just a sticker that's just pasted on as an afterthought, which, y'know, it literally is); I'd suggest having the head move at least a little, maybe a tiny bit of side to side (but not too much, since that could clash with the aesthetic)
the legs also look like some frames might be out of order or there's too large a gap between some frames (which can be fixed by adding more frames or by editing the offending frames to have less gap). another thing is that the 3/4 view of the upper body is somewhat clashing with the profile view on the legs
actually, looking at it more, it also looks like his butt juts out when his left leg (closer to us) moves forward, which is awkward