04-28-2014, 04:46 PM
That first guy's shoulders (Mario/Wario, is that you???) seem slightly dislocated. The overalls also do not seem to follow the body shape and I'm not sure what's going on with his hands , but I get that it's just a doodle. Face looks pretty cool.
Askeladden seems to be coming out nicely as far as I can tell!
There seems to be a little twitching around his collar area, however...
Actually, on closer inspection...Huh, the animation gets really weird past that fourth frame. Shouldn't his right leg be the one extending on that fifth frame? Somehow, I think you got the leg movement mixed up.
Also, you should probably make his head move sideways a little to go along with his body movement, it looks a tad static as it is.
Askeladden seems to be coming out nicely as far as I can tell!
There seems to be a little twitching around his collar area, however...
Actually, on closer inspection...Huh, the animation gets really weird past that fourth frame. Shouldn't his right leg be the one extending on that fifth frame? Somehow, I think you got the leg movement mixed up.
Also, you should probably make his head move sideways a little to go along with his body movement, it looks a tad static as it is.