Askeladden

[Level 1]

I am very unfamiliar with the story, but if the character is supposed to resemble an owl, I say you have a good start here. Though the legs are kinda bothering, because with an actual owl, you barely see it's legs, just it's feet (Here is a picture). That is, unless the owl is flying. Maybe giving the character a belt and lowering the clothing a bit down would help that.

Now like I said, I am not familiar with the story that you are basing this character off, but to me, the head look great, but the body throws off the effect of any owl features.