09-13-2012, 07:54 PM
i don't see anything wrong with you using my edit. i think the shading on the hood is fine, but i don't really understand why it just sort of hangs there instead of being influenced by his body's movement. is that a stylistic thing? that's cool i guess, just making sure.
i readded the seam at the bottom of the pants because it wasn't exactly unnecessary detail; to me, having the seam there makes the end of his pants legs and the start of his shoes more readable.
for the shading on the jacket, that's more up to your interpretation, i feel. the big reason i messed with its shading in the first place was to make more of it visible and a bit less busy. at this point, use your own discretion.
i readded the seam at the bottom of the pants because it wasn't exactly unnecessary detail; to me, having the seam there makes the end of his pants legs and the start of his shoes more readable.
for the shading on the jacket, that's more up to your interpretation, i feel. the big reason i messed with its shading in the first place was to make more of it visible and a bit less busy. at this point, use your own discretion.