Super Smash Bros. Clash

[Sevenstitch]

if Nintendo can tell a story with characters who don't say more than 2 words the whole time I feel I should be able to do that too sticking to that formula that Nintendo provieded for us gamers/fanfiction writers.

The entire reason the "silent protaganist" bit works in video games is that they are video games. You can't tell what a character is doing, thinking, or saying in written word if they never talk.

I'm not really sure why you are keeping this up here, honestly. To be blunt, I can't see why you aren't taking the giant obvious hint: No one here wants to read this stuff, whether it is good
or not. While Fan-fiction certainly falls into the "Creative" part of this forum, and Fan-fiction isn't against forum rules, it should be quite clear by now that the majority of this forum has a
rather large distaste for them.

I'm not saying you should stop writing. I'm not saying you should stop writing Fan-Fiction. I am suggesting that this particular forum is not the proper venue in which to showcase your
Fan-fiction. Don't stop coming around, don't stop posting, don't get angry. There are plenty of other things to be a part of here aside from this.