Soul Eater Sprites

[Guy]

the one on the left

Better, although, near the top part of her legs, I'd suggest straightening up the left leg a bit more (move the top half of the left leg over a little more to the left, but keep the bottom half and her foot where they are)

Give her one more pixel line of shading on her neck + some more shading on her left leg and arm to show a little more depth, also, trying to improve on just one sprite for so long can get kinda tiresome, If I may suggest, you should try spriting her from a side view or in a signature pose of some sort.

You'll get better by working with a variety of poses, then afterwards you can come back to this one and take another go at it, a good way to see how you're improving.