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02-15-2010, 10:58 PM
(02-15-2010, 08:23 PM)Baegal Wrote: [Image: SESPRITESmakaidle2-1.png]
any better?
*ahem* It's better , BUT just by a little bit, I made a 15-min edit you can compare to yours, see what needs/needed improvement on it.
[Image: makaidlelloydedit.png]
The things that you should fix are:
-light eye underline, it should be 1 color underneath otherwise she looks like she's tired or..., in this case it isn't needed.
-Her shoulders, she had virtually no shoulders...you need to lift those up just a bit.
-Hair, it looked really messy, the ponytails should be brought up a bit, and smoothed/rounded around the edges
-Bottom of coat, it looks pretty rigid/blocky, smooth that out also and give it more of a hang at the edges.
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Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-18-2010, 05:13 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by GrooveMan.exe - 01-18-2010, 06:01 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-18-2010, 06:05 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Sengir - 01-18-2010, 06:07 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-18-2010, 06:08 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-20-2010, 03:42 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Vipershark - 01-20-2010, 04:27 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-21-2010, 03:57 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 01-22-2010, 01:51 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-22-2010, 05:40 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 01-22-2010, 06:20 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-24-2010, 07:29 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by GrooveMan.exe - 01-24-2010, 07:59 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-24-2010, 08:05 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-24-2010, 09:48 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Gors - 01-24-2010, 10:03 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Jovian-12 - 01-25-2010, 12:07 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-25-2010, 06:49 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-25-2010, 08:02 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by GrooveMan.exe - 01-25-2010, 08:18 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-25-2010, 08:30 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 01-25-2010, 08:59 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-25-2010, 09:27 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Chdonga - 01-25-2010, 09:29 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 01-25-2010, 10:31 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 01-26-2010, 03:57 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 02-15-2010, 02:52 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by GrooveMan.exe - 02-15-2010, 04:36 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 02-15-2010, 05:28 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by triptych - 02-15-2010, 05:36 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 02-15-2010, 06:23 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by triptych - 02-15-2010, 06:56 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 02-15-2010, 08:23 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Guy - 02-15-2010, 10:58 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by triptych - 02-16-2010, 01:40 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 02-16-2010, 07:19 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 02-17-2010, 09:45 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Guy - 02-17-2010, 11:13 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Baegal - 02-18-2010, 05:40 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by triptych - 02-18-2010, 06:08 PM
RE: Soul Eater Sprites - by Gors - 02-18-2010, 06:23 PM

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