12-29-2010, 12:47 PM
Love the intro. as for the sheet itself, a few nitpicks before we launch into it again.
1) The umbrella still needs a topper.
2) The boomerangs need work. I say just use the ones from the old sheet.
3) The snowball taunt isn't really working for me. The concept with Gooey was to incorporate as many of the animal buddies into it as possible. That's why he throws Pitch and uses Coo in his air attack and had Chu-Chu in his down-air, etc. He needs that taunt with all the helpers.
4) The "giant ball" from his neutral (I'm guessing with someone in his mouth?) needs to be smoothed out.
That's it for now! It's fantastic otherwise!
1) The umbrella still needs a topper.
2) The boomerangs need work. I say just use the ones from the old sheet.
3) The snowball taunt isn't really working for me. The concept with Gooey was to incorporate as many of the animal buddies into it as possible. That's why he throws Pitch and uses Coo in his air attack and had Chu-Chu in his down-air, etc. He needs that taunt with all the helpers.
4) The "giant ball" from his neutral (I'm guessing with someone in his mouth?) needs to be smoothed out.
That's it for now! It's fantastic otherwise!