Man these are awesome. I hope you finish this.
I have some small crits/opinions. Sorry
Based on what I read in the first post you may be reworking some of these anyway.
1. maxim tomato has too much shading to my eyes, its a round object so the shades should be limited more (compare to say, kirby himself, or bronto).
2. Is there any way to make the entire bomb clearer on that box?
3. The details on the purple jelly bean guy (forgot his name, on top right) are very hard to read because of that dark purple, maybe you can try lightening it.
4. Mumbies' shading is kind of odd too. The shading doesn't match his shape and you might want to try darker shades. On this and my other monitor it almost looks plain white.
5. The far foot on frame 5, 6 and 7 Kirby's walk animation just looks a bit odd to me but I'm not sure why. I don't think it would be showing the entire foot at that angle? Maybe that's it.
I have some small crits/opinions. Sorry
Based on what I read in the first post you may be reworking some of these anyway.
1. maxim tomato has too much shading to my eyes, its a round object so the shades should be limited more (compare to say, kirby himself, or bronto).
2. Is there any way to make the entire bomb clearer on that box?
3. The details on the purple jelly bean guy (forgot his name, on top right) are very hard to read because of that dark purple, maybe you can try lightening it.
4. Mumbies' shading is kind of odd too. The shading doesn't match his shape and you might want to try darker shades. On this and my other monitor it almost looks plain white.
5. The far foot on frame 5, 6 and 7 Kirby's walk animation just looks a bit odd to me but I'm not sure why. I don't think it would be showing the entire foot at that angle? Maybe that's it.