Valo's Various Pixels

[Valo]

The darkly-shaded leg and darkly-shaded arm blend together for me. I'd suggest making that leg as bright as the one in the foreground, or using raising the contrast of everything and giving that leg some midtones (5 colors is awfully low for a piece of this size anyways). Also, the perspective of the foot closest to us looks a bit strange. Shouldn't it be shifted more to the left so that less black is visible?

I'm a bit hesitant to add more colors, given how WAK style works. IT really is only 2 shades per color, and limbs/etc that are farther from the camera are flat shadowed. I'll try to add maybe a 3rd shade for the leg to help it not blend as much, but i still want to keep the color count generally low. On the leg, I'm not sure. I do think you have a point about the perspective having an issue, I'll try to shift the ankle a bit 

There's a plate on its chest which connects to a triangle. However, on the other side the plate curves upwards, which makes the design asymmetrical.

Can't think of much else to say as it's still quite early. Looking forward to more!

I think the issue is that 'horizontal' seem curves upward too quickly on our left under his head. There supposed to be identical plating like on our right, but it's not drawn due to the angle. i think the line curving up so sharply might be making the illusion that the chest isn't as wide as I envisioned... 


Thank you both for the feedback, I'll try to incorporate it as well as i can!