11-26-2016, 08:38 PM
Funny with me it's the opposite, I am faster at making drawings or sprites and when I try to make animations that's when the process is getting really slow. If the humour of the lonely goomba is kinda like brainscratchcomms I am definetily going to consider it.
About the 1/4 view of the helmet's trim, the new one looks barely different. The trim's line at the left side should go more diagonal until it's about halfway of the helmet (horizontally), then you would get a horizontal straight line and at the right side of the helmet you would get a line that's also diagonal like the first line but more vertically straight, just like the example in my previous post.
The 1/4 view of the helmet's trim should also go a bit lower. Goomba's helmet isn't placed perfectly on his head, instead it's a little bit tilted and because of that the trim is higher on the front and 3/4 view and lower on the back and 1/4 view. You know like May's bandana from the pokemon anime.
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http://pkmncollectors.livejournal.com/12...=385538488
Goompapa's side moustache is good. I like the new wings of goomba and with the 1/4 view use B. I actually prefer the old Mario hat. I guess size wasn't the problem but I think the exposure of red compared to the 3/4 view is. Can you make the emblem a little bit more wider instead?
The cartoony running feet looks good to me. With the back view I wasn't talking about mario's chin but his hair, use hair A (except for the hairtuffts, those are good) and when mario's hair is at the same length as his chin make his hair horizontally smaller.
The new hammer and overalls look good. The flipped hammer also looks off to me, but I am not sure how to fix that maybe the hammer needs to be wider? Is the 'O' mouth also a reference to the lonely goomba? If not, the teeth shouldn't be rotated that much.
About the 1/4 view of the helmet's trim, the new one looks barely different. The trim's line at the left side should go more diagonal until it's about halfway of the helmet (horizontally), then you would get a horizontal straight line and at the right side of the helmet you would get a line that's also diagonal like the first line but more vertically straight, just like the example in my previous post.
The 1/4 view of the helmet's trim should also go a bit lower. Goomba's helmet isn't placed perfectly on his head, instead it's a little bit tilted and because of that the trim is higher on the front and 3/4 view and lower on the back and 1/4 view. You know like May's bandana from the pokemon anime.
http://pkmncollectors.livejournal.com/12...=385538488
Goompapa's side moustache is good. I like the new wings of goomba and with the 1/4 view use B. I actually prefer the old Mario hat. I guess size wasn't the problem but I think the exposure of red compared to the 3/4 view is. Can you make the emblem a little bit more wider instead?
The cartoony running feet looks good to me. With the back view I wasn't talking about mario's chin but his hair, use hair A (except for the hairtuffts, those are good) and when mario's hair is at the same length as his chin make his hair horizontally smaller.
The new hammer and overalls look good. The flipped hammer also looks off to me, but I am not sure how to fix that maybe the hammer needs to be wider? Is the 'O' mouth also a reference to the lonely goomba? If not, the teeth shouldn't be rotated that much.