Athena's Sprite Road.

[Gors]

the hair is much better in this sprite, you shaded it as a group of lines instead of a solid object, which is good. increase the contrast on the skin/hair (blond people are generally harder to make due to the similarity between the skin and the hair tones).

the lines are much better now, but you have some jaggy here and there, I'll help you when I go back home.

another tip I can give atm is don't mirror body parts. It'll make your character artificial.