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[Terminal Devastation]

I still stand by my joke of comparing scratchwork to that because it works well as proof that anyone can scratch.

Anyways, title explaination aside: I'd like some critique on these:
(They are scratch work)


Instead of that first one I'd like critique on the larger version I entered in that challenge.

(Normally I'd want critique on that first sprite as well, but he actually has a full sheet that I'm using for a competition somewhere, and you guys are so good at this, getting advice on how to fix it would feel like cheating. I'll ask you for advice on him afterwards)

Notes about the others: Chain girl is made up entirely of chains, shackle, and handcuffs (Plus the giant padlock, and hair/wig). So her bust and hip are actually just a chest and hip shackle. Eyes are just painted on.

The last girl wears a clear segemented cape. I'm not sure how to declutter something like that at that size without completely losing the fact its clear.