Hieros Gamos, Fakemon and More

[water dog]

There are obviously Pokemon that are meant to NOT be organic. And even at that point they shift the paradigm to the point that nothing looks organic. gear - gigigear breaks the mold becuase of it's eyes but i'd say that's where that all stops. probopass has a mustache but it's actually magnetic shavings under his nose.

if you are wanting to go in the direction of a completely inorganic pokemon, then it also can't be based off a constructed item. inorganic pokemon come form man made items, obviously, but i doubt that a whole entire zepplin, roughly the size of my house, could morph into a straight up pokemon.

i can understand your steampunk theme but what it looks more like to me is a "gag" pokemon. try to integrate your theme into the design more.

another thing, the crits here are fine, we are pointing you in the right direction, it's your job -- not ours -- to fix it with the new perspective