Glace's Sprite Thread [KH:CoM WIP]

[Glace Leau]

Hey there... long time lurker, just recently got an account and something to post.

A couple years ago I made an edit of Demyx from Kingdom Hearts II in Chain of Memories style. Now I want to remake it properly. =# (Someone's probably done better, but I have no desire to go look for fanworks of the Organization. The fandom... >.>''' )
Here's what I have:

Mine's the one without the head, obviously. Current version on top. I haven't worked on the hood at all.
The thing bugging me most is his hands. I'm trying to make his fingers splayed... they look like black squares.

Any ideas? Anything that looked better on old versions? (Sorry I didn't save the oldest steps)


... Oh! One extra thing.
Most of my spritework is heavy Phoenix Wright/Apollo Justice edits, which I won't post since y'all hate edits. But here's one I scratched that I can't get any advice on on the PW/AJ forums.

Young Kristoph Gavin.