02-04-2009, 06:50 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-04-2009, 06:55 PM by Jermungandr.)
Those are pretty impressive, but I can still think of some comments for them.
For starters, Sword Matter looks pretty thin. Both his original sprites and the official artwork show him as being a rather wide fellow. Additionally you completely left out the bulbous part of his body which is underneath his cape; you version looks like it's just a cape with a head with no body underneath at all. Also his eye is white in that form, although that's a detail that can easily be overlooked.
As for the sphere form, the yellow orbs seem rather misplaced. You have them going around the circumference of the body's hemispheric divide, but they're actually supposed to be more towards the back of the body.
That eye is awesome though. I want to make love to that eye.
@AgentLym: I think the sword slashing animation looks pretty good. I hope you're going to animate the body as well though.
For starters, Sword Matter looks pretty thin. Both his original sprites and the official artwork show him as being a rather wide fellow. Additionally you completely left out the bulbous part of his body which is underneath his cape; you version looks like it's just a cape with a head with no body underneath at all. Also his eye is white in that form, although that's a detail that can easily be overlooked.
As for the sphere form, the yellow orbs seem rather misplaced. You have them going around the circumference of the body's hemispheric divide, but they're actually supposed to be more towards the back of the body.
That eye is awesome though. I want to make love to that eye.
@AgentLym: I think the sword slashing animation looks pretty good. I hope you're going to animate the body as well though.