Sonic Eclipse

[Vipershark]

I'm assuming metal shadow?

Let's see...

1. what is that orange thing hovering over the ground near the right side of the picture
2. The ground doesn't match up. It's supposed to be a perfect checkerboard, and it's not. It's obvious that you pasted pieces together.
3. Those blown up bushes look terrible either fix them or get rid of them


1. Sonic is blurry
2. Are those sonic rush style rings?
3. There is no change from the foreground to the background. The ground pieces abruptly end.


1. Is that a tunnel? There's no top so sonic seems to just appear inside. I'm assuming the level begins with him falling from there, but there's not way for him to get there in the first place.
2. On the left next to sonic's hand you break the checkerboard pattern. Fix that.
3. Those hills on the side of the "tunnel" just abruptly stop. Make them continue to slope upward and then fade out to checkerboard.


1. The loop is badly done. You broke the checkerboard pattern and it's obvious that you just flipped the same corner segment 4 times. IIRC, there is an actual rip of a loop on tSR. Use that.


Also, about the egg pawn: It doesn't matter if they're "close enough". It is still sprite mixing, and still looks bad. Fix them.