Super Star Ultra Project - Phase 2

[Jermungandr]

Okay the eye does look considerably better but that's not where the main problem lies. It's the petals on the rear of his body. The lineart for them is terrible and they barely have any sort of shading at all. Additionally they are spaced out awkwardly. Look again at the one for KDL3:

http://www.spriters-resource.com/snes/ki...sheet/2824

See how his petals seem to be touching each other almost when viewed from an angle? Also note that when viewed from the front he only has eight petals visible, and they are relatively symmetric and evenly spaced around his body.