03-30-2013, 04:48 PM
Most of the "professionals" aren't really around anymore, honestly, but that doesn't mean we can't be of help
Anyway, what stands out to me right now is
1) the proportions change significantly during the kick, specifically the legs get much longer and the torso much smaller
2) the body also gets lower on the y axis during the kick, as if sinking through the ground
3) the punches use almost the same extended arm for both the closer arm and further arm. It looks more like the arms are static and the lines are jumping around, not that the arms are moving. I suggest differentiating each punch more, via angles, length, etc. Nobody's going to punch rapidly at the exact same angle, you'll just look silly!
The punches probably do need more frames. There's no real sense of intensity as they are.
Anyway, what stands out to me right now is
1) the proportions change significantly during the kick, specifically the legs get much longer and the torso much smaller
2) the body also gets lower on the y axis during the kick, as if sinking through the ground
3) the punches use almost the same extended arm for both the closer arm and further arm. It looks more like the arms are static and the lines are jumping around, not that the arms are moving. I suggest differentiating each punch more, via angles, length, etc. Nobody's going to punch rapidly at the exact same angle, you'll just look silly!
The punches probably do need more frames. There's no real sense of intensity as they are.
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