07-31-2012, 01:48 AM
It's really rough and scribbly and smudgy. Also, you shouldn't use lined paper. Get a pen sharpener.
I thought it was self-explanatory that you hold colour pencils angled towards the paper when you colour areas - don't hold it like when you're drawing a line. Moreover, coloured pencils aren't exactly
As for the character, it looks stiff and has some anatomical issues (no elbows etc). It looks like you just stared doodling instead of planning what you wanted to achieve.
There's a bunch of neat beginner's guides on drawing on the internet (plus there's books), but I can't think of anything specific at the moment. Someone else may be able to point you to a good one.
I don't think there's much more to be said as this is really just a child's doodle - may I ask how old you are?
I thought it was self-explanatory that you hold colour pencils angled towards the paper when you colour areas - don't hold it like when you're drawing a line. Moreover, coloured pencils aren't exactly
As for the character, it looks stiff and has some anatomical issues (no elbows etc). It looks like you just stared doodling instead of planning what you wanted to achieve.
There's a bunch of neat beginner's guides on drawing on the internet (plus there's books), but I can't think of anything specific at the moment. Someone else may be able to point you to a good one.
I don't think there's much more to be said as this is really just a child's doodle - may I ask how old you are?