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[Sevenstitch]

Man I was hoping your next post would have been a constructive one. Instead, you've decided to argue a point with us that, as far as I am aware,
has never been addressed with your writing style. Your style isn't "childish," it is "rough," and "undefined." A "younger" audiance is what your trying
to target? You do know that the minimum registration is 13, correct? Why would someone write material intended for 10-12 year olds on a forum in
which there are no 10-12 year olds?

As for "childish" writing, children's books that aren't expressly written for the learning crowd (1-5+ years) usually cater to a larger audience than just
children. Take classics like Dr. Seuss' "Green eggs and Ham," which is and always has been my favorite book (I'm 25 by the way). Decidedly a
"children's book," but i dare you to find nearly anyone who has never read it. This is because the prose in it is carefully crafted, and well balenced.
Not only that, but is written in a style that is uniquely it's own.

I guess what I'm trying to say is please, Please, PLEASE acctually listen to us and become a better writer, because your lack of technique and
unwillingness to improve is very annoying. Excuses and arguments will get you nowhere here; Either listen up, or stop posting your fiction.
Simple as that.