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My own spin on Rainbow Dash (Second sprite, constructive criticism please!)
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(03-12-2012, 07:17 PM)Bombshell93 Wrote: looks cool.
but for the sake of criticism,
the jaw line doesn't match the head shape,
The hind legs don't look to exist, maybe raise the side of the body into a little more of a bell curve,
the eyes are too close together, right ear looks too thin,
the nose and mouth are a little small.
These are nothing major and it looks good, but knit picking can't hurt.
Thanks! I'll make sure to work on those later... When my head isn't hurting and I'm not yawning.
Anyways, serious thanks. I should probably make a sprite with my tablet too, if possible, then fix it up. That might look better.
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RE: My First CUSTOM Sprite: Chibiterasu! - by Ivyleaf1212 - 03-12-2012, 07:20 PM

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