Athena's Sprite Road.

[Sengir]

I especially like the hair in this sprite, but the poncho isn't making much sense.

I guess It depends on how tight the poncho is, but I would think that if the poncho is draped over her body there wouldn't be any need for shading under the breasts but highlights over the breasts. Try looking at pictures of linen on clotheslines for references on the folds of draped cloth. And I'd suggest removing the inner parts of the eyebrows (she looks angry) and instead giving her eyelashes.

I'm not really an artist but I hope that helps