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Green Alloy: I don't know... What sprites have you done: the first, horrible one or the better looking ones? If you made that poor one, make it more like the good one. If you've made the good one, give him a better hue shift (just a bit) and increase contrast on his hands. Good job on these Smile

Pikmin: looks very deformed. Look blue Pikmin's ref pic. It's totally different, aside from color and leaf on its head (which needs work, too). They should be smaller, here's way too much colors on them, and the shading looks very dirty. Improve their animations, too.

Andross: Totally wrong. You should make his face more angular, and not use gradient shading. Also it's choppy, ugly and lacks content. I suggest making another one from scratch.

Spicy Curry: Here's a spriting tip, even if it doesn't look bad in your sheet: don't use MS Paint tools, as they make poor shapes. Just keep this in mind.

You should make it on a side perspective. The way you've done would fit better in a LOZ game, or the very first GTA games. Your spoon has outlines while your plate hasn't. Remove it completely or don't use it at all.

Pictochat: If I recall correctly, there's a screen boundary on the stage. Make them.
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My SSBB sprites - by spader555 - 10-26-2008, 04:24 PM
RE: My SSBB sprites - by Gors - 10-26-2008, 05:30 PM
RE: My SSBB sprites - by Chdonga - 10-26-2008, 05:39 PM
RE: My SSBB sprites - by Manaphy94 - 10-26-2008, 05:42 PM
RE: My SSBB sprites - by kyrtuck - 10-26-2008, 06:09 PM
RE: My SSBB sprites - by spader555 - 10-26-2008, 07:37 PM
RE: My SSBB sprites - by optimuskirby - 08-12-2011, 02:41 AM
RE: My SSBB sprites - by Random Talking Bush - 08-12-2011, 02:49 AM

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