Something I might actually use... Tried again.

[Hoeloe]

Made some minor edits, including making the metal palette darker. I think it's a little more readable now, but it's still not perfect...

Other edits include lowering the head, expanding the scarf, fixing some banding, altering the shading on one of his boots.



Could I get some comments on this, please? I want to know if I'm going in the right direction.