Something I might actually use... Tried again.

[Hoeloe]

Okay, so first of all, I brightened the palette so that we can all see everything more clearly. The game requires at least two (more likely 5) palettes of this character to deal with various light levels anyway, so this is definitely not final. I changed the shading on the boots and back leg, I changed the shading on the arm, I moved the back arm inwards slightly, slightly changed the shading on the belt, moved the scarf out a pixel to remove a horrible black patch caused by the outline.