TSR card game [Postponed]

[Hoeloe]

I think that I've got the eyes down now

You really, really don't. Those look so ugly it's unbearable. Your lineart is fundamentally flawed. Smoothing of lines should come BEFORE colouring and shading, and you can make minor alterations as you go as the structure comes together. Your lines are.... I don't know how to say it other than just plain awful.

The head is the right shape now, though. At least that's getting somewhere.