New, Not-pokemon-but-similar-to-it-in-the-pocket-monster-fashion!

[Proton]

I said that they are NOT supposed to be mash ups of regular animals, "not so much that they are supposed to be mash-ups..."

Anyway, can I have some actual advice on changes to be made?

It's left red arm doesn't look entirely connected to the body.

I also suggest, that if the blue and orange is your idea for the palette,

try using 3 for each and see how it works for you.


Or try a new way of making palettes.

Instead of just going brighter to darker, try making the darker shade duller as well, and the brightest more vivid.