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Landscape PA (wip)
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The colourscheme in this is absolutely gorgeous!

The mountains and lake have a lot of detailing on them, but the trees look a little flat by comparison - there's nothing specifically anything wrong with that, since you should be looser with parts that aren't the focal point. My only problem is-- what do you want your focal point to be? Whatever you want your focus to be should be the tightest and most polished, while the other parts should be less detailed the further away they are.
I'd suggest maybe tweaking the part of the lake nearest us, and dialling the detail there back a bit, so it exaggerates the further part of the lake and the sunlit part of the mountains as your focal point. As it is the detail of the lake is drawing the eye downwards out of the image and there's nothing to really lead it back in again.
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Landscape PA (wip) - by JosiahT - 04-05-2011, 04:15 AM
RE: Landscape PA (wip) - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-05-2011, 04:30 AM
RE: Landscape PA (wip) - by Cobalt Blue - 04-05-2011, 10:51 AM
RE: Landscape PA (wip) - by JosiahT - 04-13-2011, 02:07 PM
RE: Landscape PA (wip) - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-13-2011, 04:27 PM
RE: Landscape PA (wip) - by superdimentiobros - 04-13-2011, 04:38 PM
RE: Landscape PA (wip) - by Chutzpar - 04-14-2011, 06:13 PM
RE: Landscape PA (wip) - by Medevenx - 04-15-2011, 11:55 PM

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