03-29-2011, 12:34 AM
Logos are my strong point, so I can say without a doubt that this needs more contrast as it's a little too strenuous to read. Logos should pop out at you with clarity and flair.
In other words, try making the middle of the letters darker and the outlines lighter so it pops more.
In other words, try making the middle of the letters darker and the outlines lighter so it pops more.
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