I'm not really sure how to crit this
basically, you need refrence the original picture more
also, you need to bend your shades around each shape
then use dark color to define her features
![[Image: helpad.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg405.imageshack.us%2Fimg405%2F251%2Fhelpad.png&hash=f26be71c6f839bc5bbe6de3e70b14a21)
maybe you should start your next sprite by using shapes and going from there, freehand is a really tough route to start at
basically, you need refrence the original picture more
also, you need to bend your shades around each shape
then use dark color to define her features
maybe you should start your next sprite by using shapes and going from there, freehand is a really tough route to start at