And then something was finished

[Vic]

She basically has no neck, and her head is too far on the right
Her eyes are quite hard to read at 1x

made an edit, hope you don't mind

Tried to fix what I said before plus some other stuff, like changing the shape of her head slightly to make it feel more feminine
I also changed the color of her hair because I actually liked it the way you had it on the smaller version

hope this is somewhat helpful, if not, just ignore me