07-12-2008, 01:08 AM
the shoes on your kirby are too round for him to be standing on them.
Flatten out the bottom like on the kirby the other guy posted.
Outside of that, don't make Kirby such a perfect circle, he's not arial or anything.
He's standing so his body should be resting on itself, so it should be slightly squished towards the bottom.
The feet need to appear to be more attached as well.
A lot of people think Kirby is easy to sprite because he's a ball, but making a ball with feet doesn't cut it.
Also, the eyes need to be slightly longer and possibly further apart.
Look at the sprites from Super Star for ways to make the eyes larger without making a solid black pixel on the sides or the bottom.
Good luck.
Flatten out the bottom like on the kirby the other guy posted.
Outside of that, don't make Kirby such a perfect circle, he's not arial or anything.
He's standing so his body should be resting on itself, so it should be slightly squished towards the bottom.
The feet need to appear to be more attached as well.
A lot of people think Kirby is easy to sprite because he's a ball, but making a ball with feet doesn't cut it.
Also, the eyes need to be slightly longer and possibly further apart.
Look at the sprites from Super Star for ways to make the eyes larger without making a solid black pixel on the sides or the bottom.
Good luck.