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[Chutzpar]

Big improvement on the face, start sorting out the body now pls :E

I keep having to talk about boobs on this forum! Let me do it some more: that v-shaped cleavage makes no sense! To get that shape the boob'd have to be shaped like a rotated oval and they'd be like... conjoined across the middle
gross!
Literally all you need to do is remove that weird v shape and they'll look much more believable.

Boobs are literally just sacks of fat. Draw them like it.

Her whole torso seems kind of high? Like her shoulders are paper thin! move everything from the collarbone downwards some and reshape the shoulders to fit. If she were real, the space from her shoulder muscle to her armpit would probably be an inch or so. Obviously you're not going for realism but it still needs messing with to make it more convincing.

Sorry to sound so fuckin anal but these are pretty quick fixes that'd improve this drastically.

If you finish this up to the same kind of quality as the face it'll genuinely be professional-quality stuff DO IT DO IT REACH FOR THE STARS