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#1
02-20-2009, 10:38 AM (This post was last modified: 02-22-2009, 02:55 PM by Toad.)
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ITS YOSHI!!! C+C please.
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02-20-2009, 10:46 AM
Head's too small. Arms are fused with body, and it seems out of style. Try using the M&L2 Yoshi sprites as references.

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02-20-2009, 10:48 AM (This post was last modified: 02-20-2009, 11:17 AM by Toad.)
Yeah I did use those as reference , Ill be working on it.
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Ok, fixed head and arms.
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#4
02-20-2009, 11:25 AM
I think you made it worse. The top of the head was OK, but it was that big round nose/mouth thing that was too small.
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#5
02-20-2009, 12:38 PM (This post was last modified: 02-20-2009, 12:54 PM by Toad.)
Ok Ill fix that later.
Edit: Fixed
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Which one do you like better?
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02-20-2009, 06:25 PM
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#7
02-20-2009, 06:38 PM
Sorry, but out of all of those, the first one is the best so far.
Don't really know what to say to make it better, is the wrong shape?
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02-21-2009, 11:23 AM
I don't know erm.. At the beggining I thought the nose was good.
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02-21-2009, 01:37 PM
i dont really know what to say. ive never really seen a yoshi from the front view >>. arms are too fat.
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#10
02-21-2009, 02:01 PM
Needs brighter colors.

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#11
02-21-2009, 05:08 PM
I tried a new Yoshi head...

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02-22-2009, 10:52 AM (This post was last modified: 02-22-2009, 11:12 AM by Toad.)
Me likey Ok better yoshi coming soon.
[Image: newyoshis.png] I kinda made 5...
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#13
02-22-2009, 12:31 PM
You should see his cheeks, not his chin... his hands are too big and shoes too small, and his eyes seem too wide.
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#14
02-22-2009, 12:33 PM
no offense but your just kind of butchering the character at this extent. Why not try learning the previous M&L styles before trying to tackle this one. Trust me this will be a big help to you.
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#15
02-22-2009, 12:50 PM
Ok I fixed the things you said chris. [Image: newyoshi.png]
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