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Paper Mario Customs - SeventhHero - 12-29-2008
These are the first ever customs that I've ever made, so enjoy!
Lady Bow
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/5bd9b3d78405.png
Bootler, Lady Bow's butler
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/2d16d1136330.png
and Finally, Watt the Lil' Sparky! =D
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/d8f46a753749.png
Please comment and criticize!
RE: Paper Mario Customs - Quinlan Vos - 12-30-2008
Watt ain't half bad. Needs some work, for instance, it seems a little too circular and the sparky things seem too long. I would need a good refrence to back up my statement.
The ghosts, however, look to scribbly. Remove the outline, unless that's a style paper mario style you're trying to do...(and if it is a style, then add an outline to Watt...)
For bootler, there isn't even a single sprite of him "standing" still...I need to see a basic lineart to critique it.
RE: Paper Mario Customs - SeventhHero - 12-30-2008
Actually, the very last one is.
I'm fixing the Watt one now,
and Ive made the outline a lighter color, I wasn't really intending
on doing Paper Mario style.
Bow
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/8e369cd08550.png
Bootler
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/44b6e133690.png
RE: Paper Mario Customs - CeeY - 12-30-2008
There is no shading :/
RE: Paper Mario Customs - Quinlan Vos - 12-30-2008
Bootler isn't so bad, but Lady Bow looks...odd. She isn't round like she should be. She looks like an old, wrinkled ghost, like a balloon that was blown up a week ago and now it's starting to get flatter. Look at the refrence you have on the same page. She's very round there. Also, the eyes look creepy. I don't know how to crit the eyes, so...yeah.
RE: Paper Mario Customs - SeventhHero - 12-30-2008
(12-30-2008, 12:54 PM)CeeY Wrote: There is no shading :/
Yes there is. maybe I should darken it..