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Kirby 64 Planet Selcetion - Elebit - 08-19-2008

Still a WIP, and credit to RTB for the space background (Squeak Squad cutscene; I can't make space...) and the font... well it had no tag... I still need to change the green outline, add a background, and color the arrows... And maybe more...

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/3797/kaworldselecttm0.png
C&C please, its for my project to remake Kirby 64.

To do~
Pop Star
Rock Star
Aqua Star
Neo Star
Shiver Star
Ripple Star(dark/restored)
Dark Star


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - GrooveMan.exe - 08-19-2008

The lines feel a bit irregular, but the shading and anti-aliasing is nice.


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - Elebit - 08-19-2008

SHould I make the star more sharp, as in the points??


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - GrooveMan.exe - 08-19-2008

No, that's not the issue. I can't help but feel that the black line is of varying thickness.


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - Elebit - 08-19-2008

Should I make it Yellow or Orange??


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - killme - 08-19-2008

The color seems fine.
Its just the outlining...


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - Elebit - 08-19-2008

The colors are official...

And by the outline, could you be more detailed?? Should I make the points bigger? Sharper?? I still need to add the rings though...


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - killme - 08-19-2008

Its a little varied, the out line that is, and could be a little (just a little) bit more pointy
I don't know if this will help or not, but here is some official artwork.
I couldn't find a screenshot.


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - Elebit - 08-19-2008

Thats the one I used as my refrence lol, thank you.


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - killme - 08-19-2008

(08-19-2008, 09:08 PM)Elebit Wrote: Thats the one I used as my refrence lol, thank you.
WEIRD


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - Elebit - 08-19-2008

Better?? Its a bit pointier and I added the rings but they are bugging me...
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1494/kaworldselectlr4.png


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - Miles07 - 08-19-2008

YES. The rings can be a bit WIDER - farther away from the planet, if you get my meaning. The planet itself is okay... It's just the rings that need tweaking.

Also, there seems to be a little bit of orange (?) near the bottom of the planet, as if you're making it "puffy"... It just doesn't seem right...


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - Elebit - 08-20-2008

Better?

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/7026/kaworldselectte4.png


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - Mageker - 08-20-2008

This is great =D. Will you make the other stars too?


RE: Kirby 64 Popstar - Miles07 - 08-20-2008

(08-19-2008, 06:27 PM)Elebit Wrote: ... its for my project to remake Kirby 64.

I'm guessing yes.

And Pop Star is looking great!