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RE: Mag's Dark Souls Fangame Concept - Gwen - 05-10-2014
The background and color choices are nice, but the anatomy of Mista Green is very bad. Neither sword have handles either.
RE: Mag's Dark Souls Fangame Concept - -Ash- - 05-10-2014
I think you should stop putting so much detail into your sprites until you can fix your proportions, but that might just be me. I can only recommend sketching out the sprite first then posting that and get the crit you need on the whole subject of proportions.
RE: Mag's Dark Souls Fangame Concept - Kelvin - 05-10-2014
I noticed something about the knights in that screencap.
![[Image: 5B6z0.jpg]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fsnag.gy%2F5B6z0.jpg&hash=e326300f6d8647a92b65091915b451a9)
The shoulders are at weird angles, and not just cuz that sword is ridiculously huge, but it actually looks dislocated. He's also leaning forward in a funny way and his legs wouldn't be that close together with a sword that big. If it's a non-combat pose, I'd think he'd keep the sword down or something, or maybe across his back or in some kind of holster.
![[Image: jlFLm.jpg]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fsnag.gy%2FjlFLm.jpg&hash=05015d32ade2128154faa3af0db77434)
This guy's heel looks like it's going behind the other one. Only reason I can think he'd be standing like that is he needs to pee and can't get his suit off. XD Sorry, but that's how it looks to me.
[EDIT]
I could be wrong about the guy's shoulder; that sword is blocking a good bit of it. Still looks odd.
RE: Mag's Perfect Chaos - Mag - 07-01-2014
![[Image: perfect_chaos_by_alaingalvan-d7olxtm.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc04.deviantart.net%2Ffs71%2Ff%2F2014%2F181%2F9%2Fe%2Fperfect_chaos_by_alaingalvan-d7olxtm.gif&hash=f6a08ee0af5f87696ba2ef96880d8766)
Remember this guy? Well I was still working on it, but really slowly. See, I listen to people's CC, adjusted the lighting and colors, changed the details on stuff like the teeth, a whole mess of stuff since the last time it was here.
The Dark Sauce concept screenshot is on hatius as I work on all the CC everyone's been giving me. Don't think I've ever had this much CC! xD
It got a front page on Newgrounds though, so that's nice.
RE: Mag's Perfect Chaos - Deathbringer - 07-01-2014
I'm at a loss for words...