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Fullmetal Alchemist - Plasmi - 04-01-2010
![[Image: fullmetalalchemisti.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg215.imageshack.us%2Fimg215%2F9094%2Ffullmetalalchemisti.png&hash=c3c2fce29a3eeeffcd1e76191673ebda)
The Fullmetal Alchemist, Edward Elric. I tried to make it similiar to Pokemon style. Anyway, can you see anything that can be improved/altered?
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - triptych - 04-01-2010
literally everything can be improved
i'll make an edit give me a sec
also never sprite on a white background
white messes with your ability to see contrast as well
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - Plasmi - 04-01-2010
okay thanks.
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - triptych - 04-01-2010
oh welp i just noticed you said LIKE pokemon style
![[Image: poopg.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg413.imageshack.us%2Fimg413%2F6544%2Fpoopg.png&hash=0bf58487a4d52e5f3faf991f3d03a9b8)
well
there's that anyways
the main problems with this are that he seems to be facing completely towards the screen as opposed to facing down(how he should look), the colors are extremely dull, and lolanatomy
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - Plasmi - 04-01-2010
crap your right. well ill change the colors, however i didnt mean that i wanted it to be completely pokemon style.
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - triptych - 04-01-2010
yeah i mentioned that right at the start of the post
didn't notice it until i finished the sprite, hurrr
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - Plasmi - 04-01-2010
okay edit- colors changed
![[Image: fullmetalalchemist.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg387.imageshack.us%2Fimg387%2F8875%2Ffullmetalalchemist.png&hash=459986aa42aa2ec2e3ff3e4a7d946b8e)
is that better
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - Link - 04-01-2010
He still really shouldn't be facing the screen completely, regardless of the style you're going for. It looks much better all-around if it is looking down a bit.
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - Plasmi - 04-01-2010
okay thanks ill change that
okay- i tried that... and it turned out suckish. could you please do an edit of what its supposed to be?
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - Link - 04-01-2010
Quote:Posted today 06:55 PM
Quote:This post was last modified: Today 06:59 PM by Plasmi
You have to give it more than four minutes of effort, dude. =P
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - Plasmi - 04-01-2010
![[Image: fullmetal.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg266.imageshack.us%2Fimg266%2F9392%2Ffullmetal.png&hash=f49c6d111a3765e0465200965dffd320)
I redid it in another style... is this any good or does he need to look down more? And what else could be changed?
Edit- i realized that the face was way too big... i changed it
Edit- i noticed that some of the black parts of the hair were standing out- fixed
RE: Fullmetal Alchemist - Cobalt Blue - 04-02-2010
the face's readbility is really low. avoid using black outlines on small details.