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Neo Kirby X! - kirbyace - 06-29-2008
neo kirby,a lazer kirby just with a diffrent name?sounds boring,but his life isn't,he goes through battles adventures and other surprising events!
PG1
![[Image: jfayoh.jpg]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi26.tinypic.com%2Fjfayoh.jpg&hash=7b62cacc0edb63b88982833569cce292)
PG2
![[Image: 347ivib.jpg]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi28.tinypic.com%2F347ivib.jpg&hash=f184be273bbc52537ff575e69e28d476)
PG3
http://i31.tinypic.com/dop82d.jpg
PG4
http://i25.tinypic.com/15piutj.jpg
Zee's edit : Picture stretched board, as such, tags were broken.
RE: Neo Kirby X! - Rakia - 06-29-2008
1. I can barely read the font...wanna use a text box of some sort?
2. Ugly UGLY Quality. Try saving it in .png
3. What the hell is going on?
RE: Neo Kirby X! - Rosencrantz - 06-29-2008
You have to get a proper comic flow going. Don't do things without giving explanations. Also, if you have to explain the comic OUTSIDE of the comic itself, then it isn't exactly a good comic.
Also, try and use bigger frames.
And NEVER use text emotes in your dialogues.
And also try and make better punchlines :<
RE: Neo Kirby X! - Afr0Blu3 - 06-30-2008
Horrid punchlines that barely make sense, the font makes it almost unreadable, the JPEG quality's really not happening, no one can figure out what's going on, no attempt at grammar, low quality backgrounds.
Some tips
- Try to have some kind of pre-planned point to the whole comic
- Save the issues as a PNG, never a JPEG
- Speech bubbles help make the text stand out
- Use a decent font, BlamBot.com have a bunch of good ones
- The jokes need to actually be funny
RE: Neo Kirby X! - TPoe - 07-09-2008
I don't get it.
RE: Neo Kirby X! - Colton - 07-09-2008
This is the best comic ever. I'm swear I'm not being sarcastic.
RE: Neo Kirby X! - Skink - 07-09-2008
kirbyace, I strongly suggest you to
STOP POSTING
RE: Neo Kirby X! - Fireshock - 07-09-2008
This is the worst thing I've ever seen.
For starters, make every frame the same size and save the comic as a .png format.
Also add proper speech bubbles and make the plot understandable.
RE: Neo Kirby X! - kirbyace - 08-02-2008
man you people are rude! DX
RE: Neo Kirby X! - Boo - 08-02-2008
skink Wrote:kirbyace, I strongly suggest you to
STOP POSTING
Lol! You always crack me up Skink.
RE: Neo Kirby X! - Kairos - 08-03-2008
kirbyace Wrote:man you people are rude! DX
Welcome to the internet.